Writing

This is my four picture story!!!!

 * The sun glistend on the magical cat’s back as it set off on the mission to rule the world of cats.Before any humans were born cat’s ruled the earth.The 100th king of the cats name was Bubbles, this is a story about how he became King of cat land.When Bubbles was born into the world he was blind and could only drink milk from his mother.His mother was a champion Butterfly catcher who was had won 6 gold medals at the Cat Olympics which were held every 5 years.Bubbles dad was a champion Hugger so when anybody got hurt in Paw town Bubbles he hugged them so much that they just about died of Strangulation. **


 * Bubbles dad was a very busy man because there was a huge budgie that was terrorizing the Cat world who killed the cats with his diamond encrusted spoon.The budgies name was Peter and he was triple the size of the cats.One day Bubbles thought to himself and about his father and Peter. he didn’t want any other cat families to hate him because his dad was trying to hug them but ending up strangling them so he came up with an plan to catch Peter the Budgie.Peter the Budgie lived in a remote forest 200 cat miles away which would take 5 days to get there but that wasn’t the problem. On the way you had to cross a desert that was so hot all the plants had died not even the lizard cats lived their but also there was a Oasis just over halfway through the desert filled with milk for the cats if they got thirsty the only way across would take them to the remote forest that was filled with cat skulls that Peter had eaten.Bubbles spent a week planning before he left, he brought his trustworthy gun that looked like a turtle in a shell he wrote a note on the can of fish that Bubbles family was going to have for dinner that night saying :”{}_(*&^% [translated from cat to english I am going on a secret mission to kill Peter do not come looking for me.] Bubbles then set off on his way towards the desert it took him half a day to get their, when Bubbles got their he used his magic powers that only his Mum his Dad and he knew about to call, a giant eagle called Jim. Jim arrived a few seconds later and Bubbles said to him “Can you please take me across the desert and can you drop me off at the milk Oasis” ok said Jim and away he flew with his friend Bubbles on his powerful wings. **


 * When Jim had landed carefully by the clear milky Oasis Bubbles jumped off and sent a cloud of dust into the air when the dust settled down Jim was nowhere to be seen .Bubbles shouted until his throat seemed like it was on fire so he went and got a long drink from the Oasis that soothed his throat. Then he sat down and thought about how to get out of the trouble he was in.He tried use his magical powers but rememberd that he could only use it once a week so Bubbles set off walking towards the lush forest after a few hours he was just about out of the desert but ahead of him there were 3 dogs that were carnivores so Bubbles thought quickly as they bounded towards him he pulled out his gun that looked like a turtle and shot the dogs they yelped and fell onto the ground dead.Bubbles went around the dogs and walked into the forest that held Peters lair. **


 * Bubbles walked fearlessly into the forest that was full cat skeletons that Peter had hit on the head, when cats had tried to kill Peter.The forest was coated with dew and the trees all looked healthy with moss and magic mushrooms on them.Bubbles saw Peters lair just ahead so he sat down to make a plan he thought that he could sneak into Peters lair at night and cut him up with a sword.Bubbles immediately walked around quietly and found a metal rod that another cat had come to kill Peter but failed so Bubbles started sharpening the metal rod just as he finished sharpening it Peter came out of his lair and chirped so loudly Bubbles just about went deaf. Bubbles charged towards Peter and yelled ‘come and me you fat bird’,Meanwhile back at Bubbles house his parents just found out that Bubbles had left to fight Peter the bird.Bubbles covered his ear with one paw and with the other he charged towards Peter while he swung the cat made sword.Bubbles ducked and weaved away from the outstretched mouth that held the diamond encrusted teaspoon,Bubbles soon got tired so he tried to trip the bird over by wacking its feet.Just as Bubbles was about to fall onto the ground and cover his whiskers and face, he hit the Peter on his left leg and he fell over on his back as Bubbles moved in for the kill Peter screeched and tried to fly away but Bubbles had made a trap and Peter flew straight into it Peter screeched again and again but Bubbles didn’t let him out.Bubbles found some mice and rats and threw them down and then said to Peter ‘You stay down there for a few years and then i’ll come and let let you out and if you get hungry you can eat worms’.Bubbles walked back out of the forest and across the desert and through the front door of his house and yelled ‘Suprise’.I’m back Mum and Dad. **


 * So this is the end of story apart from a few weeks later the 99th king of cats died and Bubbles was appointed 100th king of the Cats. **


 * Our story about: Little red riding hood, Three little pigs, Snow white and the seven dwarfs, Pinocchio and Goldilocks and the three bears. **
 * WALT  understand how fairy tales came to be and complexities of the characters. **


 * On your marks, get set, GO! And the race is on! Bacon, (the first little pig) immediately finds the straw bales and fills his trailer full of it. Close behind him, Ham (the second little pig) comes racing past and finds sticks in a pile right next to his little brother Bacon. The last little pig Sausages, also the oldest went the opposite way and finds himself by a broken house made out of bricks. He grabs lots of bricks, puts them in his wheelbarrow and sets off to the building site that he had planned earlier. Meanwhile Bacon and Ham had just started building. It was a tight race. Just then it started to rain, all the pigs got distracted and rolled around in the mud that had just been formed from all the dirt from the construction sites. While this was happening the three pigs had forgotten to put the covers over their houses to stop the rain and all the straw collapsed giving Bacon no shelter and more importantly, he was coming last in the race. Well thats what he thought anyway. Ham, his older brother had also been having problems with the rain. All his sticks had gone rotten, leaving him also with nothing. Sausages, thought that he was on a role, but even though he thought that bricks were water proof, all the cement went runny and he couldn’t make his house. **


 * Because of the rain, the judges were waiting for a house to be built, but now no one had anything to use. Sleepy, (one of the eight judges) fell asleep in the rain leaving on seven judges: Bashful, Happy, Doc, Grumpy, Sneezy,Dopey and Snow White. Just then Bacon and Ham followed by Sausages walked up to the eight judges and Ham said “This is too hard can we please have someone else to help us”. Just then the 3 Bears came walking down the road that were close to the three construction sites. Snow white saw them and said: “Three Bears, would you like to help these three Pigs make their houses? It’s a competition so you have to be able to build fast.” **
 * Next there was a long silence while the three bears decided. “Sure, we can help,” Said Papa Bear, breaking the silence. **
 * “Dips on Papa Bear,” Said Sausages, cheekily. **


 * So they started to build. In the rain. Papa Bear was with Sausages, Ham with Mama Bear and Bacon was with Baby Bear. Now they had partners, but they still made the house out of the same materials. And the same design. The three pigs didn’t want to do anything else, and the bears didn’t want to argue. They were too nice and kind to do that. Not to mention that they were really busy making a house. Papa Bear tried to speak but the words didn’t come out. Mother Bear tried as well but she was too busy, and Baby Bear didn’t have anything to say. He was too young to understand. Bacon was pretty much by himself because Baby Bear didn’t know what to do, or how to do it. he just stood there, waiting. waiting for the rain to stop. Waiting for the race to end. Just Waiting. **


 * Then just as they were half way through, the most terrifying thing happened. The Lying Reds gang came out of nowhere, saw the houses and started heading towards them. The three little pigs thought that they were going to die, but then quickly realized they had the bears with them and relaxed a little. Pinocchio started to talk but no one could hear him, they only knew that he was lying because his nose was growing rapidly. Then out of nowhere, Baby Bear said (from the stories that his parents had told him) “I’ve got your nose!” and yanked Pinocchio's nose off with all of his might. Pinocchio fell to the ground with pain and then (the rest of the gang) Little red riding hood and Goldilocks got really angry and started to run at them. No one really knew why Baby Bear pulled off Pinocchio’s nose, but I guess when you get nervous you do dumb things and Baby bear was shivering with fear, when Pinocchio came at him! The fight was long and the worst bit was, no one was winning. No one actually hurt anyone badly enough to break their bones, so everyone (except Pinocchio) was fighting. And fighting. And fighting. And more fighting. Trust me this fight went on and on until finally Sleepy woke up and yelled: “WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! YOU ARE TO STOP THIS FIGHTING AT ONCE!” **
 * And to the judges surprise Goldilocks and Little Red riding hood said at the same time: “Yes father, we’re sorry we woke you up.” **
 * And to make the day even more weird, Pinocchio woke up and said to Baby bear: “Your funny you know that?” But of course Baby bear didn’t understand anything that he said, but smiled as though he did. **


 * Apart from all the crazy stuff that happened earlier, the race to build the house the fastest continued and all three pigs (and bears) drew. You heard me. The three little pigs finished their houses at exactly the same time.That didn’t work out for them, as they wanted a winner, so they had another competition: Who can write the best story (this is the winning story that Baby bear wrote). So they had their winner, Baby bear was awarded the prize of Pinocchio’s nose (but It didn’t matter because Pinocchio grew a new nose pretty quickly), even though the original prize was money! But Baby bear didn’t care, so they all lived happily ever after. **


 * Creative Writing!!!!!!!! **